scariest moment in my life.

this week we have been writing about that scariest moment in our life and this is my poem or writing that we did and when we do you can click on it and then it will scan threw and then you can read. hope you enjoy.

Tuesday 31st october

Walt:revise our knowledge on recount writing.

When i was driving pass a cemetery I was asking” what is that” then when I said that they said “well go see who it is” and then they said” your papa and nan are here” they took there but I was to scared.

We opened the box and all that was in there was scale trains and rats beside it. We tried to get but we were not  aloud to touch or it is bad luck. but when I seen a little boy touch his dad we felt sorry. So then we got all the rats out but then…

When we got to the car me and my Aunty said. “ we are never going back in” then we went in the car and my nan and papa said. “ you know that man back there well he is right where you are sitting” then screamed and ran out.

this is my piece of writing hope you have fun reading.

We said. “ we will never get back in that car” then they said. “ sought it or walk home”band then we said.” we will walk home and we'll walk everywhere if we have to” that what we said.